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Crossing The Line

I crossed a line
And can never go back
I'm sorry for what I did
I know my heart was black

I know you forgive me
For the hurt I caused you
But I mean what I say
My apology's true

I know what I did was wrong
I know that it was bad
I know that you're the best friend
That I've ever had

I'm glad I was forgiven
For what I did to you
I'll never cross that line
I wish I hadn't hurt you










Author notes

I'm sorry, Tayler. I know you forgave me, but there are no words to describe how sorry I am for hurting you the way I did. Best friends, always and forever...I love you!

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  • The Lost Boy -PP-
    February 3, 2007

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    The intention behind this poem is so sincere, and it's worded in a sufficient manner, but I can't help but to think that there could be a but more maturity in word-choice. Still, good write.


  • smntha.
    February 2, 2007

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    we were fighting over you...its hard to explain. email me and i'll tell you the rest.
    All my luv,
    Dollface


  • tritium
    February 2, 2007

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    Aww...

    Aww...Such a good piece. But when were you guys fighting? Well, tha's none of my B. So anyways..it was a good poem, and it had good rythem...Short and Sweet.