I look though the window of time,
Just to linger, within her gentle mind...
To hold her hand, to caress her soft
Lips with my fingertips,
To last forever in her gentle thought's,
Never to break away... just to hold her
Gently within my arms, whispering
Warm gentle words, her gentle arms draped
Around my neck, her soft scent of
Roses engulfs me... caressing
her, stroking my fingers along
her back... looking deep within
her eyes... seeing her for the first time.
A contest entry
- Love Options by Blooming Poet.
355 points, ended March 10, 2007, 14 entries
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425 points, ended March 29, 2007, 91 entries
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450 points, ended April 2, 2007, 15 entries
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600 points, ended April 4, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
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525 points, ended March 23, 2007, 16 entries
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475 points, ended March 23, 2007, 11 entries
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300 points, ended March 31, 2007, 7 entries
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450 points, ended April 18, 2007, 171 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what you think
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sorry but since you've failed to put an option number and i have no idea how this fits any of the options, you are DQed again. if you want to enter a fresh write go ahead, but this just doesn't fit any options i've given.
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sorry to confuse you like that...this is ReLiEnTk93, i'm just on a friend's name. again, sorry, i forgot i wasn't on my own name.
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What option number is this??? I need to know.
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AWWWWW
how wonderful, this poem is just so beautiful. Well done poet!! -
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As her brother, (and co-judge)I have to say this: very romantic. Yet, what lies beneath these pretty words? If my sis agrees with you, will you be true and honorable? I too can say such pretty words, but what lies inside the man who weilds such words? Hmm? Good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful. Well done.
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there are a few words that you didnt spell right but altogether, its beautiful
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This is such a great poem!! It's sooo sweet and romantic. I'm very touched by it. Plus on top of that, you are the only person who has entered my contest. Thanks sooo much!!
<3 Jenerali
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AP Bf for Jenerali.
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lol...
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why is that so funny.
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cool!!
this is a great piece, i love how you show your feelings and how descriptive you are, the thing is that you havent send me your pic, so, i'll let you participate, for ONLY this time, but you will be under the ones who have sent it, i mean, your poem must be better than the other's ones, to be chosen.
Anyway, this is a great piece, so I encourage you to keep writing like this, cause it's great!!
kisses!!
(* pau
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This poem can be much improved by adjectives, but the tone of the poem itself is truly universal and great. -
Ohh. My this is so romantic and so deep and passsionalty beautiful. Thanks for entering.
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