If I had to chose
Between everything I have
The air I breathe
And you
Screw the air I breathe
The only thing I need
Is you
A contest entry
- Short, Rhyming Love Poems by Lj-.
345 points, ended February 14, 2007, 27 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, really great. I like that it is short and to the point. Nice write.
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very pretty =)
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short sweet and beautiful! thanks so much for entering this precious piece of poetry in my contest. best of luck!
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This short poem radiates that sweet and tender message one would love to hear everyday from the person they're in love with (and the other way around). To the point what you have here, though maybe the sentiment and words you described it sounds a little bit overused.
Let's all hope this is metaphorically speaking
cause if you wouldn't have the air, you'll only be able to have that person for about 4 minutes, at the max 
Anyway, thank you for entering the contest - I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
short, sweet and gorgeous! very good
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AWESOME!
This is sooooooooo touching! I so so so loved it! so warm, and mushy and CHOCOLATEY!!! a beautiful piece of work which goes on to say that a LOT can be said in a very few words.. this was perfect! keep the pen rolling, all the best in the contests, lots and lots of love and cheers, shuvi -
this is a cute little poem and very sweet. Although you didn't depthen the poem I still know how much love is in this poem. great poem thanks for entering
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This makes me smile. A quirky yet deep way to describe such an intense level of love. The emotions are raw and powerful. Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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now that is cute
For only being 7 lines, you put across a raw emotion. it's really 'cute'
thanks for the comment on my poem. In relation to the comment about 'and that cute little scar' Its supposed to show that although the person has imperfections, they are still perfect in my eyes
(or something along the lines of that.)
luvvs
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I like this piece. Not romantic but then again it is.
Thank you for entering,
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Awww that is a really sweet poem and I really like it alot
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this is .... leaving me speechless. it is very forward and bold, and omg, so so so so so so so so ....so, sweet!! i love it! it made me laugh as well as made me wish i had someone to say something like that to me. amazing and brilliant write!! luv~ paint
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awwww. it's so very lovely. i adore it.
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I know how it feels to think that about someone. Very directly said...
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