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Ashes

Like snowflakes they fall
From the glass-gray sky
Leaving trails of angel dust in their wake
They fall on my eyelids
Brush sorrow away
Apocalyptic dreams of a broken tomorrow
Ashes and dust
Dreams and sorrow
Blended together, a whisper forever

Author notes

-Written on-the-spot, in-windown, in about 5 minutes
-I am very tired now so if this ends up bad I'm sorry =P

Was it good, or am I trying too hard to be elegant and artsy?

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  • Martha Laura
    February 3, 2007

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    not really... i think your poem was kinda awesome! and to include the pic of mcr? i'm liking your poem even better! keep up the good work!

    lotsa cheers,
    -martha laura-