dreaming
swiming in the darkness
aching, boiling, crashing against the waves of dispare
Look at me make me smile All is well with the world
crashing against the steel
breaking the lights that surround me
coiling up inside the thoughts of ages
Look at me make me smile All is well with the world
Beating smashing crashing around
the world is perfect i am broken
I am broken the world if perfect
Look at me make me smile All is well with the world
This is my chaos world
this is my mind.
Filled with darkness lit by a candle
this is my mind
but guess what
Look at me make me smile
All is well with the world.
Please tell me what you think
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I like it though it is rather sad. Talk to me tell me what's wrong.. Well i love this. the way it was written and everything... you really should write more often. *hugs*
~Kitten~
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I dunno, Craig...I want to say something positive, but I know you won't believe it. Sometimes happiness is what we make of it...perfection is subject to one's one perception of what "perfect" actually is. Or, at least, something along those lines. Meh, I duno. 
Just a couple tiny typos:
Line 3 - dispare = despair ?
and
Line 11 - if = is ?
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heh always my personal typo finder-smile-
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*chuckles* Well, someone's gotta do it.
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