Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Snow

Waiting silently.
Hope is faint…
But waiting –still.
Soft, it falls down around and round.
Wintry breath chills, but beauty –
Frozen, pure –
Falls to earth.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Pietro456
    February 14, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    I like this one too !

    I think cluesgandg is a very good writer ! I think this poem makes you think it is snowing out side! I almost want to go into the garage and get the shovel.


  • azure85 gold member
    February 2, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    A lovely poem for today, when the snow fell. You have described the anticipation and delight of this beautiful wonder!