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I Wish

i thought we'd last forever
i thought we'd make it through
i thought you'd always love me
the way i thought i loved you
i wish we were still happy
i wish you still made me smile
i wish i didn't give in so easy
it was like taking candy from a child
i don't want to let you go
i don't want to keep up the tears
i dont't want to try and control you
but loosing you is my greatest fear
if there is some how i can make you stay
if there is that choice
maybe i can live another day

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  • She Stole My Voice
    February 2, 2007

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    Hun, I can relate.
    It's so sad and depressing.
    But I know you'll live through it. (I did)

    Keep up the killer work, take care, and keep on writing!

    <33

    ~Princess of Shadows~