Beauty is the name of a gental soul,
The princess in the tower,
Secluded from the world by a broken heart,
A treded apon flower.
Tears fallen from grace-an elixer of heart,
Are troubles releaced in pristine cristal streems.
Gentaly they clense you of all of your woes,
And slowly they heal you, and soften your dreams.
Plant a seed little flower, of all of your pain.
Let your tears be it's nourishment-soft loving rain.
Feed into it hopes, and deliver it dreams,
As it blooms you shall realize nothing's bad as it seems.
A contest entry
- Unbreak my heart! by Poetic Aphrodite.
425 points, ended February 2, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ooh i like it i like it!
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yey im glad ^_^
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Wonderful
This is so sweet. You did such a great job with it.
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Thanks penman
I'm so glad you enjoied it. It was actualy inspired by your poem "woonded rose" that was entered in the same contest.. *looks up at you, grins, giggles* not that I had a chance in the world to compare to you penman. lol. I just entered for fun.
thanks 4 the comment. I'm so happy you liked it.
~Mary
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awwww.... I luffle it. so sweet and so kind. it makes you want to become a flower... well anyway, it was a beautiful write. you should write poetry like thiss more often.
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thanks auntie!!!!!!!!!
I'm so happy you like it! You probably know how hard it can be for me to write happy poetry. This was truly a challenge!
Love your neice,
~mary
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Dayem! I MUCH like this one! Do not drown in your sorrows, use them to grow hope. The idea, alone, is beautiful, and to see it so perfectly stated here in words is more beautiful than I know the words to say. Thank you for the post, keep 'em coming!
Live LARGE!
Rick
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yey!
im so happy that you like it!
its alot more upbeat then my usual stile but it was a fun challenge. but yes thank you for commenting!
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hopeful!
Well I must say...i used to think that there was no point in caring when all it brought was pain...your telling me to bury it and let it grow and care for it...and one day i will be able to look at it and see the light...patience...hmmm i love it...thanks for sharing and thanks for the comment on mr sandman..
peace and love
mj
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why thank you
yes to tell you the truth i often find my self in a pit of despaire but the only way to escape is to try to get over it. im glad you enjoyed it.
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i really like the last two lines, great job mary
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sam i didnt think youd like that line
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Thankyou for your beautiful submittal, Bella
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your quite welcome
i love to mend hearts so i just had to enter this contest.
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Awwwwwwww hunny, so touching and heartfelt, sadly beautiful, the ache of your heart, and pain......
I hope you're feeling well hunny
This is just so amazing
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