This hurt still felt
The betrayl still there
Time and time again I wonder
Why did you leave me?
For once I thought
Maybe you left on vacation
Just for yourself.
But then I realized
You weren't coming back.
The pain is still strong
I wonder if I can still go on.
you told me you'd be there
Whenever I needed you.
Well where are you now?
Depression, attacks, pain, and anxiety
That is what I deal with now.
Stop the hurt, the pain, and fear
Bring back hope to this lonely soul.
Just promise me once,
Now that you have left
That you're still here for me and her,
The one precious thing you left behind,
That yearns for her mother's touch
And love and song
Come back to the ones
That need you most...
Author notes
Please tell me what you think... it's about my sister and how much I miss her.
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Oh my...
Ashleigh, you still feel so deeply about your Sis. I suppose you always will. Your poetry is a way to reach out and express...but I know I wish I could do more to help.
I guess...all I can say- is make her proud...
-Love always,
Grampa
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I hope I'm making her proud as well. Thank you for the comment Goomps. And you've done so much for me. You've kept me optomistic!
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I wish I could be more, Ash...but bless your heart.
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This is beautiful, touching, and sad!!!! I think you have done a wonderful job potraying the emotions that you are feeling!!!! Great write!!!!
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very well written doll,
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like how there is a hint of hope. I hope all goes well. Great Poem.
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