let him in.
he is the only sensible human being on this planet.
fall in love.
fall in love hard.
and be told you are
BEAUTIFUL.
EVERYTHING.
lie in bed and talk for hours.
take long train journeys to be with him.
hold his hand as tight as you can.
give up giving up.
stop drinking.
rest your tired head on his chest and whisper
i love you.
wait with patience as he catches his breath
to tell you it back.
this time with such conviction that you know it's true.
argue.
cry hard.
but kiss him harder.
know that everything will be better in a while.
let him hold you when you feel ugly.
don't push him away.
fall asleep in his arms.
know that he is all.
let him be your all.
he won't let you down.
he won't let you down.
THIS IS FOR REAL.
A contest entry
- Does Love Truly Exist? by Poetic Aphrodite.
525 points, ended February 4, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh this is GORGEOUS!! this IS love! oh i just want to cry and cry after reading this..just marvelous, wonderful amazing..to be loved like this!!
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Unfortunately, we since had our problems and we are no longer like this
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this is the way love is, to be loved like that love like that
to be loved like that love like that. to say more would be a detraction from your lovely tender wonderful.... on and on poem. special. stunning.
...Danni / to be loved like that love like that.
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Thankyou for your lovely submittal, Bella
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What a truly touching piece.Well done and thaaankyou for sharing such beautiful thoughts with us.
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