Will you love me?
when all of my petals will wither,
When no fragrance of mine
will make you wild
and when the last touch of beauty
will desert me.
Look at me!
I am still your rose,
I will not allow the wind
to touch me,
I will debar the sunlight
from smelling my fragrance
I am yours
I am only yours
You may not accept my discrepancy
but I will always inject my every essence
in your life.
Author notes
Dedicated love is essential for an ideal society.
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Comments
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Perfect !!!!
This poem is just perfect. Beautifully written with a magnificent story of love. I love it. Very well done.
Anna.
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wow, another great poem. Now THIS is a portrait of true love.
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mmm... I do agree with Sneha. Love should be sincere and dedicated. Any one who loves for anything other than love is a sinner. Great wordings Sneha. I am starting to like your poems more. Especially, I do love the way you pull your sleves to provoke the emotions of the reader. Great write dear. Keep Provoking. Long time ... Where had you been my sweet friend? Eagarly waiting for my valuable guest.
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Wow. This is a powerful write and beautifully done. I really loved this one. I love the sentiment in the whole poem, it is hard for me to pick one place that I loved best. Great job.
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