how can i ask you to respect me
when i dont
how can i demand you love me
when i wont
how can i beg for your acceptance
when i despise myself
how can i plead for you to stay
when i just want to leave
its not fair
for me to demand these things from you
i apologize for the responsibility
ive forced upon you
forgive me for the burden
ive stuck you with
its no wonder that you are gone
i dont blame you for walking away
id be gone if i could...
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything by Welcome-To-Hell.
700 points, ended February 16, 2007, 54 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
whatever
Comments
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hello! thanks for the comment on my poem! this is great, basic and simple but really great. very clear words and rhythm!
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Wow
That was amazing and very emotional I loved it havent we all felt just like that I couldnt have put it any better if i tried just a wonderful job best of luck to you in the contest
Bravo -
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wow
thank you!
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