Twin spirits ~
identical in reflection,
perform
rhythmic striptease ~
an excavation
Self beliefs
discovered false
beneath layered masks worn
True strength blossoms
lies in vulnerability revealed
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Reminds me of the masculine and feminine sides of self trying to balance, questioning all and moving forward. Very strong. Awesome job Bel
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I liked this. It is concise. I think maybe you could expand on it a bit, and have more imagery. But for what it is, I thought it was nice.
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Such a thought provoking piece. Intriguing and profound. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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Wonderful write mummy, very interesting indeed.
Love you,
Your lunar angel
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Ooh, so pretty and original. Never have I read anything similar to this in the least, making it all the more wonderful.
I can't find a flaw within this. Well done, Oma.
With much love and good luck in the contest,
your kiddo Nikki ♥
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Very well written, Bel! A classic write from you! Wish you all the best of everything!
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lovely write showing the duelity most seem faced to wear it also shows the depth of self that is so complicated in nature that even to ou own consciousness we wear masks and other faces that we might not neccessarily be aware of well done Bel
love,
Michael
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Hmmm the words penning does show that representation of spirituality whilte in the same menner, holds its grip onto society's undisclosed reality.
Keep pennning -
Lovely poem. Very strange picture. A little creepy actually The poem fits well with it though. Wonderful write
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