What course is this?
How did I miss?
Such impudence and fret
Alone says I?
Oh no, not I
Foretold I must regret
I fell in love
No more than a dove
You took my heart in shambles
I cared for you
We said “I do.”
Hate be such more for gambles.
You broke my spirit
You broke my heart
Forgive me if I digress
I just can’t help but think of you now
Believe me I am not depressed
The match of us
Filled with disgust
I no longer need you
For your best friend
You know Leland?
Is in my bed, not you.
Author notes
Option #1 OH and lucky 13
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Comments
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Different. Flowed well, vell written. You express faith so mich in your writes. You are a classic in your own right in your right.

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I have to agree with the last comment. I can see the humor too, but I can also feel the emotion. Good job!! Good luck too!
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haha, i can see the humor, but i would have to agree with the other comment, in any case well writin
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there is alot of feeling in this one i hope i never do that to my loved one


