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Not You

What course is this?
How did I miss?
Such impudence and fret

Alone says I?
Oh no, not I
Foretold I must regret

I fell in love
No more than a dove
You took my heart in shambles

I cared for you
We said “I do.”
Hate be such more for gambles.

You broke my spirit
You broke my heart
Forgive me if I digress

I just can’t help but think of you now
Believe me I am not depressed

The match of us
Filled with disgust
I no longer need you

For your best friend
You know Leland?
Is in my bed, not you.

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  • oldpoets
    July 4, 2007

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    Different. Flowed well, vell written. You express faith so mich in your writes. You are a classic in your own right in your right.


  • hollywood.
    February 2, 2007

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    I have to agree with the last comment. I can see the humor too, but I can also feel the emotion. Good job!! Good luck too!
    -Tink


  • emeraldsoldier
    February 2, 2007

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    haha, i can see the humor, but i would have to agree with the other comment, in any case well writin

  • sexycowboy
    February 2, 2007
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    there is alot of feeling in this one i hope i never do that to my loved one