Baby, I Miss You [Version 2 aka "Edited" version]
Lyrics by : Robert Rumery
Waiting in a cold deserted town,.
in a hotel that really doesn't have a name,
and the town at night is simply a ghost town,
the street lights flicker as the cold wind blows,
my six string is my company,
and my lyrics are my only salvation,
but I truly wished you were here,
the night is so lonely without you,
without you by my side,
and you telling me that everything will be alright,
but what are you going to do when your on the road,
Chorus : Baby, I know you miss me,
but I'll be home soon,
playing my way into your heart,
singing my way into your soul,
Power ballads play so loudly on the radio,
Firehouse's don't treat me bad,
I close my eyes and I lay on the bed,
I look towards the ceiling,
somehow I can feel you with me,
your spirit guides me in my time of need,
I told you when I left you on your doorstep,
that I wasn't going to be too faraway,
if you miss me just open a window and listen,
I'm playing this song for you,
I'll always be in your heart,
and baby you'll always be in my soul,
but right now we feel worlds apart,
Chorus : Baby, I know you miss me,
but I'll be home soon,
playing my way into your heart,
singing my way into your soul,
This old cold damp hotel doesn't feel like a home,
not as warm and inviting as our bed,
you fell in love with this music man,
many times I've wondered why you did,
I guess you were in it for the ride,
and all those ups and downs,
I know your sitting by your bed,
waiting for the phone to ring,
waiting for me to pick up on the other line,
but that won't happen tonight, baby.
there won't be a knock on that door,
to tell you that I'm home,
your just gonna have to wait,
and than we'll be whole again,
that's why I'm singing this song to you,
yeah.
Chorus : Baby, I know you miss me,
but I'll be home soon,
playing my way into your heart,
singing my way into your soul,
You know that you will always be in my heart,
no matter how far we are apart,
as I travel this rocky countryside,
with me and my luck six string by my side,
I'm gonna wish that you were here with me,
but I know, baby. That your here with me in spirit,
as I sit here and sing these words to you,
you know that I love you,
and I will love you until death do us part,
A contest entry
- Song/Lyric Writer's Contest by Acronym.
850 points, ended March 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lyricists and Songwriters!! by Andy Stephenson.
800 points, ended May 12, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Robert these are amazin
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Good Lyrics
These are good lyrics, but it seems like it would be difficult to wrap a melody around them. Do you have one? Thanks for entering my contest. I really appreciate it.
Andy

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melody...
Melody. It's a piano ballad. In my head it sounded like "Beth"
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Very Good
Oh this was vey nice ... Well done and thank you for the entry ... Be Well
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Wow! This is so sweet, and deep. I like the chorus especially. I can definitely relate to this piece. Great write.


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