Darkness and loneliness have consumed my soul,
deep inside this silent den.
The taint fosters deep inside me,
upon this painful night.
The love I hold dear to my heart,
I can hardly withhold.
For my angel has join me,
in the darkness and taint.
The angel I love so,
I cannot be with.
She denies my love so much,
yet all I desire is her.
My love for everything will soon die,
alone with this pitiful mortal body.
I am not good enough for her,
and so.. I am temted to end my pain.
Author notes
The woman I love has now become even close to me, but she denies me the noly thing I desire... and yet.. she always says she wants to help me..... Please read this as well.... my angel...
http://allpoetry.com/Poem/1896974
Assist me please...
Comments
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So heartfelt with emotions raw and telling. Such a sad state, with such a terrible solution written about at the end of the poem. Hope things hvae cleared up a bit and you now are feeling better.
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you AMAZE me. i really love this.
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wow
You are so wonderfully emotional. The small details, and the parallels between the darkness of a physical area and your feelings of darkness always play off each other very nicely in your works. All my love and applause..
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