All sights and sounds of you are what I once drank.
The thought of your finger tips made me tingle.
I gave you everything and was treated accordingly.
Upon our release I look to you and see nothing.
Your stunning wits no longer astound me.
Who will I turn to, now I’m in a virgin state of mind?
I no longer tremble at your touch,
I no longer faulter at your gaze,
I no longer fade under your crushing cologne.
Now that you've been had,
Now that you've been quenched,
Now that I'm in a virgin state of mind.
Your aura no longer occupies my dreams.
I've taken from you all you offer.
You've been burgled, and now you must fade away.
Author notes
Sweetest Decline
A contest entry
- Let Me Hear The Voice Of Your Heart! by TommyTRASH.
450 points, ended February 17, 2007, 11 entries
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This is a awesome poem. We're both in this contest and I offer you the best of luck with it. The first part is my favorite, its very good. :] Good luck Again!
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Hey, great poem! Very nice. Rather sad write, about the falling out of love maybe? No longer seeing someone the way you once did. Great write! Good Luck!
Shady Lane
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