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Sound of the wind Chorus ---- by (((beyondsonic

It's the sound of the wind that moves me,
It's the sound of the wind that soothes me,
It's the sound of the wind that reminds me how,
Your Holy Spirit flows through me
Your Holy Spirit blows through me!

It's the sound of the sea that moves me,
It's the sound of the sea that sooths me,
It's the sound of the sea that reminds me how
Deep Your love is for me,
How far You streched Your hand toward me!

It's the sound of the rain that moves me,
It's the sound of the rain that soothes me,
It's the sound of the rain that reminds me how
Your Holy Spirit engulfs me!

It's the flash of the storm that moves me,
It's the flash of the storm that soothes me,
It's the flash of the storm that reminds me how,
Powerful You are!!

It's the sound of the wind!
It's the sound of the wind!

Author notes

Don't have any verses yet- sorry!
These are the choruses of a song im writing to God, I hope to add some verses soon.
Gos bless yall!!

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  • Lady-Pegasus
    March 17, 2007

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    Very well written piece, with a wonderful flow and tempo, almost lyrical and perfect compliment to the wind concept. Again a very few spelling and grammatical eroors but that is about all this one needs to shine! Excellent work! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *


  • Poetic Drug
    March 14, 2007
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    that is a good nature poem


  • Ethiopian Queen
    March 6, 2007
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    Horay!!!

    wow this is my favorite out of all of them! it's amazing :0) great Job Praise God! :0)


  • No.Longer.Bleeding
    February 5, 2007

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    wow, i love the 'engulfs me' chorus. this is definitely a great praise to God that explains what He means to you!!! GREAT JOB!

    thanks for entering,
    Monica <3


  • Vagabond
    February 3, 2007
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    great work, thanks for entering

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