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Vampire

Unknown.

Your Blood Touches My Lips

I Feel The Changes

Your Blood Cursing Through Me

I Feel The Changes

My Heart Stops Dead

I Feel Cold And Lonely

The Darkness Consumes Me.

Splinters In My Fingers

Escaped The Empty Grave

The Moon Hits My Eyes

I Feel Empowered

The Thirst Of The Hunt

I Feel Empowered.

I Sink In My Fangs

Skin Rips Like Paper

The Blood To My Mouth

Like Lambs To The Slaughter

Her Corpse In My Arms

Toss Her In The Water

Turn In Shock

A Stake To My Heart

My Body A Bomb

Any Second Now

....Im Gone

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  • okadadokie
    February 20, 2007

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    Great write. Interesting backround, kinda made me dizzy. Nice short but to the point poem. Great job. Good luck.
    ~Oka


  • NeverLoseHope
    February 2, 2007
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    Wow

    It's incredible how so few words can have such an impact. Congrats on a very powerful poem.