Get out of my life, stay out of my head,
No way you'll ever get into my bed.
Leave me alone in the dark of the night,
The way I feel...you're an unwelcome sight.
So be on your way, don't linger, don't sass,
and on your way out you can kiss my ass!
A contest entry
- Anti Valentine by Memoirs of a Girl.
385 points, ended February 20, 2007, 22 entries
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I thought this poem was kind of funny. The ending, I mean. Sweet and short. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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ewhhhhhhhpps.
Looks like a vent with mucho impact here.
I'm sorry something made you so upset. Really.
Your form and rhyme worked well with it, however.
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Hahahahaha! I have to tell you, the rhyme and rhythm are excellent, but the entire package is hilarious!!! You just made my evening!!! Hugs, Patricia
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WoW! Now, why don't you tell us how you really feel??. LOL... Great write!
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Relatable.. and very good. I like it.
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