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Vampire Bride

Their love so forbidden
They have to be hidden
Their hearts a crimson red
As her heart bled
And he held her close
And wispered, My love for you still grows
They sat and gazed out at the night 
He leaned in to his dark love, with a gentle bite
The blood dripped down her pale neck
Their love was like a ship wreck
Mysterious, hidden, and dangerous
His eye gleamed lercherous
In the dim room 
She knew her life was a gloom
But with him, she felt wanted
He wasn't vaunted
Like all the humans she knew
He lifted her high above the blue
His dead lips brushed hers
Her emotions of love lust stirs
And the two emotions collide
He, her savor, she his vampire bride


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I also wanted it to be a bit longer....but...

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  • RottenXHeartX
    February 2, 2007
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    Beautiful. As a vampire entusiast i loved it. X


  • Samantha-.
    February 1, 2007

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    This is awesome. I loved it. It was so scary, but the end just pulled it all together. I love the title too.
    It was an amazing, and pretty poem altogether.
    Luv ya,
    Dollface