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I can feel

              Can you feel the world pass by?
              The things you feel and see,
              The love in one another
              I can feel the things I love
              The things we know and love
              Can you feel the magic?
              Love is in the air!
              Singing high above us the birds
              I can feel it now
              I can see it now!
              I can dances happily!
            Can you feel  it?

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  • Bryan K Johnson
    February 2, 2007

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    This world we live in offers so mutch to feel. I like how you dip into ot. Good flow, and an overall nice feel.

    Bryan.