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Apart

                          I am apart
                      of a lonley slef.
              I am apart
                  of no one to love.
                      I am apart
                        because
                I am
                        I am apart
                    of a lonely one
                  not any part
                  I am lonely
                    Lonely I am
              Lonely,
                In need of some one
                    to love
                    I am apart
                        of a lonely buch
                    I am apart
                      I am apart
                  a lonely one
                    I am apart

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  • Diatribes
    November 4, 2007

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    This soundsd like the mindless, rambling of pointless thoughts, soaking up your conciousness while you lie restless in bed.

  • cantletgoanymore
    February 3, 2007
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