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Blood and ashes

Blood and ashes,
run into my eyes.
Bullets,
lead,
Shrapnel,
pierce my sides.
dirt encrusted
lynch pin jammed.
grenades lost,
hope a sham.
burning muzzle
in my hand,
flesh smell rotten,
when burned form a man.
“war is hell”,
fuck the devil watches in aww,
as gods creation shows its most deadly flaw.
fighting for what?
Killing for who?
What is the reason I am out  here?
blood oozing form my wounds…
Blood and ashes  for war to consume.

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I'm dark and demented what can I say.

be brutal

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  • love my kee
    February 5, 2007

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    Coolieoshessness

    This is a totaly righteous poem. Very creative too. It is also quite sad, with the thought of war. I am going to read more of your poems. lol.


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 4, 2007

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    Liked the message you share in these lines - easy to read and understand. Liked the flow and the way you wrote this - Questions need answers, but what does that say about our fellow man?


  • Rainbow-High
    February 2, 2007
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    You're beautiful and genius <3