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Just another thing to Know

Thinking
Trying
It is just another thing for me to know.

Walking
Trying
To reach that little light at the distant end.

Screaming
Crying
Why in the world do i really feel like dying?

Hurting
Shivering
Why do i scream and no one can ever hear it?

Sitting
All alone
Thinking of all who loved but now don't at all.

Thinking
Trying
It is just another thing for me to know.

Tripping
Falling
Into a deep relentlessly never ending black hole.

Running
Rapidly
Back through the endless forest of time.

Regretting
Remembering
The times that I thought they really loved me.

Burning
Simmering
All my organs tearing apart from the inside out.

Thinking
Trying
It is just another thing for me to know.

Drying
Dying
My once impeccable ambition into ashes of defeat.

Withering
Flying
My once strong heart into the sky's eternity.

Spinning
Twirling
The only thing thats going crazy is my mind.

Breathing
Sighing
Holding it all in to keep from crying out loud.

Thinking
Trying
It is just another thing for me to know.

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  • Princessdove
    February 4, 2007
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    great job!

  • Princessdove
    February 3, 2007

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    Wow. This write is powerful and pationate. Great Job!! It expresses so much. I wish there was more. You have great insight. Keep it up!


    • SilverMoonFeathers
      February 4, 2007
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      SUP!

      Hello i have just made this poem Just another thing to know by mwah new and imrpoved ok so you can read it all over and tell me what you think of it now.


  • bleeding-within
    February 2, 2007

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    wow this was kwl!!!! explains how alot of peopel feel as teenagers... trust me i know! its was nice simple and expalined how many peopel feel

    my fav bit was "Screaming
    Crying
    Why in the world do i really feel like dying?"

    it had a cute lil rhyme to it

    anywayz well done on the gd write

    bleeding within xx


  • Bryan K Johnson
    February 2, 2007

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    Really nice flow, I like the way it rolles off of the toung. It is a sad peice, no doubt about it. But really good.

    Bryan.

    • SilverMoonFeathers
      February 4, 2007
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      SUP!

      Hello i have just made this poem Just another thing to know by mwah new and imrpoved ok so you can read it all over and tell me what you think of it now. If you want.

    • SilverMoonFeathers
      February 2, 2007
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      ...

      Thank you for the comment i really appreciate it. Yes it is a sad piece and it literally did roll off my tongue.


  • February 1, 2007
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    Hey... I really enjoyed this poem... It is soo good !!!!!

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