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Letters and Words

Tear stained letters
of frayed words.
I don't cry for you
I cry for them.

They who wear the masks
of friendship,
and yet are demons in disguise;
Helpful when it betters them;
Gone when it better you.
Their presence marked only by shadow,
shadow dominated by fear.

I rely on these demons for companionship
but they turn and run at first call.

What am I to do with myself
when I am all alone
with nothing but the tear stained sentences for company?

CRY?
SLEEP?
RUN along the sides of those demons I desperately hate
calling for forgiveness.

The heart beats out of my chest
very slowly.
I can't feel it anymore.

I must be hollow;

like a tree.

Will a blackbird come and nest
where my heart once was?

Maybe if I stand still
and let time pass me by.

If you wish to see me,
come and see what time has done.

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  • TorturedSoulandMInd
    February 1, 2007

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    Well written but very pointed. I wouldnt be surprised if there was a razor's edge intended to be on this one.
    Dont let quarrels spill over and effect who you call a friend. You may have a friend whom has taken the mask of a demon, and yet kinder eyes hide behind that mask.
    Take care Paige,

    Tortured Soul and Mind