With this blood red rose
I promise you a love
That will never see winter's harsh cold
Or fall's dying beauty.
I promise you a love
That will forever see
Spring's blooming hope
And summer's nurishing sun.
A thornless rose to represent
A life not tainted with hatred,
But blessed with the beauty of love
For now and ever more.
Such perfection frozen in time
Never to wilt or fade away,
Serving as a constant reminder
Of a love that will never betray.
Please tell me what you think
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hey hey hey girly i havent seen so much of your poems latly but ya protally havent seen much of mine eaither but add some more i want to keep reading. and dont worry your true love will soon show. i no this poem may not make much sence to you now but it will eventually just give it time.... love ya bye.
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Hey This is great!!! keep up the good work. i hope to see more of your work soon! you diserve all the applauses tou get and keep writing k!
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to die for
this love is to die for somthing you will ollmost never find the rose reminds me of a glass rose stays the same with sutch beauty the poem with sutch taste and emoshon fantasic job i loevd it
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capturing
this poem was captivating like the versuses that ud speak to your husband on your wedding day i loved it
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