Wrapped in ((fog))
sitting by -myself- on the
___beach___
listening to the
~~~waves~~
.r.e.m.i.n.i.s.i.n.g. a
b
o
u
t
BiTtEr-sweet >>
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moments <<
breathing in the [salty]
A--I--R
I am
.Xx.forever.young.xX.
Author notes
Well, this isn't really good, I'm just trying to cure my writers block-- it's not working.
well... yeah.
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This looks so awesome! I love it!
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I love your style, Han. Beautiful context and I love the part where you say "Forever Young". I know the ocean can be very remedial for the body and for te mind. It's short and sweet. And the background and colors really emphasize the soul of the poem. Great job!
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Interesting poem in both the words and the way it's presented. Good write.
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very nice!
urghh I am going through the exact same thing. with the writer's block, I mean. and I can also relate to them poem. Ugh. Maybe we've reached a joint mind block for some reason that is possible because we're friends. I donno. MERDE!!!!!!
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blam. expletive. plot twist. fbi. expletive. blam. roll credits.
i really appreciate people that experiment with form. i've heard it said that poetry and other literature isn't art. i defy them to read this and tell me that again.
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OMG that's beautiful!
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