i'm bleeding on the floor
it's everywhere -
all over
i'm ripping out my hair
my head hurts
again
i'm feeling the wrath of many
it's hateful
and vengeful
i'm vomiting on the floor
it's a mess
am i
where the hell am i at?
can't stand this
this high
i'm hurting on the inside
and out
again
i can't seem to alter this time
this ego
and when?
i'm bleeding on the walls
well i'm making them bleed
i'm forcing the ritual
out of my heart
i'm feeling nothing
agaian
all over
i don't know what to say
or do
i'm rupturing on the outside
bloody and gory
i'm sewlling in the eyes
so tell me a story
i'm bleeding
i'm bleeding
and no one can stop me
i'm bleeding
you're leaving
good-bye my love.
let me hear your voices...
Comments
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you words speak to my soul.. so many times i've let myself fall down and out, but you've got to keep fighting even at the lowest of lows... great write, thank you for sharing!
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OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!! BRAVO BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!
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The flow of this was amazing and everything was so well written. Actually to me it kinda sounded like a song, it was VERY well written and I like it. I love the content of it and ahhhh! I don't know I just loved it.
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Wow! this was pretty good! So different from the stuff I have read. Great job! The flow of the poem was really good and so was the imagery.
~~~Vampireblood~~~
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