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Death...Gone

He's left me alone
With no way out
So within this garish Maze
I must forever roam
Perhaps I called Him too often
Dear Death, I wanted him
To spread a shadow over the white
And bring me a comforting omen
No
Death has left me
I am alone
And abandond
Life is all I see
Life is all I'll know

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  • Lj-
    February 1, 2007

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    I like this. It's simple and to the point.

    I also liked the way you arranged your words.

    Good write.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Good luck!