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Philosophy (Get there...?)

Although my religious beliefs may differ.
I hope you’ll get to where I’m going
or maybe we can meet up in the where you’re going…?
either way were all trying to get there,
either way lets just all pray we end up there.
Anywhere, you’re where,
my where, we all want it.
To get there…

Author notes

Just my general thoughts on how we view the aspects of afterlife, we battle and argue about what happens to people after they die or what will happen. When I say just say let's pray we all end up some nice in the end. I will pray to meet you in my heaven if you can pray for me to meet you in your heaven.

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  • Swan song gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    Well done good luck. Maybe we will all get there.


  • islekine gold member
    October 24, 2007
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    There is only one rule..I was very

    specific about....10 Words......
    You may try again..if you wish.
    Mahalo!
    *PEACE*


  • bgoub
    April 10, 2007

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    Very Interesting. Haven't really got proper time or energy right now to do this properly, but I really like this. To me, it speaks of a common goal, or at least a common endpoint, where everyones going to end up one way or another. I wonder, can you get to exactly the same place by another method, or will it be different because you're approaching it from a different angle. Sorry, incoherence all over again, but great write. I#ll talk to you properly when I'm awake, and you're going straight on my favourites in the meantime.
    All the best,
    Ed


  • nichtmich silver member
    February 1, 2007

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    Inspirational

    This is a philosophy I wish more people would adopt. This is deceptively complex and beautifully simple and much more effective than 'live and let live' You're word usage is a humerous way to convey a serious message. Best wishes in the competition. Deb


  • GuideVirgil
    February 1, 2007

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    i think you used the wrong choice of you're/your in the 6th line, but besides that, this is quite good.


  • MotherMachineGunn
    February 1, 2007

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    Interesting and thought provoking. I love the confusion of this thought. Good Job.

    ~MotherMachineGunn~


  • Goodolenad
    February 1, 2007

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    ah, someone who thinks as i do in this case.

    bravo with the simple language and sincerity.

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