Angels and demons are flying over me.
Casting both light and darkness into my eyes.
The only one who can see this is me,
so others find me strange and hard to understand.
I am Shouting, Shouting now,
to spirits who rise and the ones whom fallen.
I keep to myself a little longer...
Shouting, shouting in the depths of loneliness.
Alone, I can only comfort myself.
I stand alone...Where is life when it had a meaning?
I stand alone... Nothing seems real anymore...
It's endless motions...
I'm only alive because I keep on breathing.
I only dream, because I choose to close my eyes,
it's just repetitive endless motions.
I am Shouting, Shouting now, for the place I'll call sanctuary.
There is nothing else I choose to be linked too.
Shouting, shouting at myself,
to never look back for anything.
For what life has left me,
just isn't enough to survive.
Calling, calling for what's left of loving.
I keep to myself yet a little longer...
Shouting, shouting now, at spirits both good and bad.
I keep to myself yet a little longer...
Shouting, shouting in the endless nothing.
I keep to myself yet a little longer...
Author notes
8) Write something depresseing, make me feel your pain
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425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 48 entries
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Comments
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This is really good I can totally feel your emotions as I'm reading this. Its a very good poem.
Good luck in my contest.
-Erin Lynn -
I know this feeling, I feel as though I am only alive because I am breathing also, heartbreaking, but so well written
I thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and wish you the very best of luck
Karen -
Fabulous!
I love the torment in your words, the anguish you portray in these lines, the desperation to be heard. It is always comforting to know that other people have the same thoughts and feelings as myself.
Splendid work.
~MotherMachineGunn~
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