The family was full of fun ,the family was always on the run
they sang and laughed and ran in the sun
the snow was welcome ,the rain was cool,
the people smiled , the people sighed and tried to follow
in golden footsteps on the sands of life
somewhere they failed and tried again
no one smiled, no one played, the game was over the spirit was killed
bags of gold lay strewn around and mounds of bones filled up the ground
tears filled the grave ,the blood was white
a voice reverberated under the tree
did you think of me
did you think of me
no more was there a caring soul
no more the loving smile to see
a shadow crossed the heart of one
and left in a hurry the family tree
granma, granpa you n me
brother ,sister and memories
Please tell me what you think
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You aptly described the family as otherwise we are caught in lonliness.the later part exactly focus on that. A family is a joy we share. Thanks also for commenting on my poem. Cheerup is a simple word, but it should be effortless, I only described working of the mind...not necessarily state of mind..Thank you for sharing
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a truely great write. Your words allowed me to feel a series of emotions form happiness to sadness and lonliness. You have done a great job!!
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life is a kaleidoscope of emotions
Thanx for your generous comments .I am so glad . god bless n keep smilin
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