They were terribly in love....
Their souls were one
As if like the beating of a drum
In rhythm and steady
Both strong and heavy.
The love that they had
Was passionate and so real
Until death came
And took it away.
He died so young
Seventeen that day
They buried him down,
Below the ground.
She was a mess
Her heart stripped in two
Pain is not enough
To explain how she felt.
Cold and alone
Dying inside,
Never again will she share
Such emotion all because
They were terribly in love.....
Please tell me what you think
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So touching are your words here! Sad and over-flowing with emotion!
Blessings~
Az
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Wow
Great way to tell a sad love story. I liked how it got right to the point and how you used "beating of a drum."
great job! Keep it up
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