When we are together you take away all the pain
Holding me close
Protecting me from harm
My favorite place to be is here in your arms
Free from the world and all my suroundings
When we are together my heart can't stop pounding
You give me a comfort only you can supply
The look in your eyes when you hold me close
Gives me a sence of belonging
A moment of hope
Theres not one person around me that can compair to you
The feelings I feel are something new
Only you can make me feel this way
Make me fall in love with you every day
Telling me everything will be ok
Helping me make it through everyday
My feelings for you will defently never go away
I'll love you forever
Baby I'm here to stay
I want to be that girl that holds your heart forever more
The one you love and would never let go
I know you love me
Theres no doubt in my mind
The things about me no other can find
No other girl can compair to me in your eyes
A beautiful smile and comforting eyes
Times have been great
And times have been hard
But together we stand still holding on
Reffusing to loose you
Reffusing to loose me
We'll hold hands together as we grow old
I want to make you happy
Give you all I can be
Show you theres more than just what you can see
I'll give you my all
Make you as happy as you make me
As we walk through this world
Hand in hand
Together forever
You and me
Author notes
hmmmmm....rob van damn.....
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest by DepressedAngel.
900 points, ended June 4, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great poem, good write, expresses sincere love. CONGRATULATIONS ON BRONZE.
Hugs and love,
Petratani
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great job i like this alot...very cute... bravo... very awesomeness... RVD is a good wrestler... love it Heather
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WOO HOO!!! EXCELLENT
my verdict said it all lol great poem sandra keep it up!
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Awesome!
That was a really great poem! I really liked it! It shows real feelings. I wish you and your boyfriend the best of luck! You have a lot of talent! =)) -
Sweet
Aww, this is sweet. I'm sure your boyfriend will love this piece. The promises you make are wonderful, and the plan to be one of those couples who even in their golden years, are hold hands. I long to be one of those couples as well. Great job on this.
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thanks so much for commenting, i havent been on in a while so i added all kind of poems i had been writing and it seems as though no one comes to read them
thanks so much i love to know what people think. ill be adding you to my favs. list and reading more of your work soon.
oh yea he loved it, and i hope you find that one day.
love the shark
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