I am the one you choose
To tell your secrets you have never told
You visit me once or twice a day
As you step inside and for hours you stay
Turning the knobs that bring me alive
My sweet surender
Hits your body like ice
Our bound is one that many find odd
But between me and you everythings fine
You step inside and it all begins
As I cover you fully
Your body begins to shake
Then after a second everythings ok
As my icey surender turns warm
Your lips start to quiver
And your eyes start to storm
Then as though no one was there it all starts to unravel
Your secrets are told and relife fills your soul
With the drop of every tear your gerif is let go
As I hold you close and cover your sorrow
You trust me like you trust no one else
As I am silenced
For your secrets I can not tell
As you turn me off
And step out into reality
Our time is up
Untill you need me once more
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ouch..the ending sucks. not sucks as bad writing..but just sucky sucky. horrible how someone can do that to someone..especially if its their own self. very interesting poem. can take it many ways...i guess it depends on the reader and how theyve used or been used, or how they use - then this could really be an eye opener.
anyways. good job. enjoyed.
blu
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