covers messy hair
with baseball cap
glances down at feet
when complimented
and blushes at eager advances
sasshaying to the left
and then to the right
avoiding groping hands
into a corner dark
when she thinks
nobody's watching
hands over head
with gypsy spirit flair
secretly she smiles
dreaming
of an unknown lover's arms
dancing
in between the real fantasy.
Author notes
My fav country song is Old Familiar Love by the Oakridge Boys.
what's your favorite country song?
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mhhh wonderful poem. me gusto mucho.
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I really like this piece.
Great poem!
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Like the Oakridge Boys too - love their music. Liked the brevity of these lines and the images they create. Flows well - enjoyed the read.
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excellent
i actually saw the character you created in my head while i was reading it, well done
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saw the character, eh? smiling...what color messy hair do I have?
good to know you're still out there.
what music you listening to these days?
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