Ive never felt this feeling before
I wonder why I feel this fluttering in my stomach
Once I saw you I just knew
That you were the one for me
I love your laugh, your singing, your soul
I love the way the sun hits your eyes
Such beautiful color & shine
I love the rose petals flying by
It makes this moment so much beautiful
These butterflies arnt going away
I can't seem to stop thinking about you
I can't seem to stop sighing about you
Am I in love?
Could it truely be?
I blush when I see you
I smile and giggle when I hear you
I loose all signs of words when anyone talks about you
And when i'm with you the butterflies appear.
I wish I may!
I wish I might!
Please oohh God!
Let him be mine!
I'm in love!
And he is too!
I just wanna scream..
You mean the world to me!
All day long I daydream and wish
That somehow we could be side by side
That somehow we could watch as the sun rises
In the early dawn of the morning
And watch the stars shine and twinkle
And the moon send us light
And watch at the wildd flowers sway i the wind in the late afternoon
I wish I may!
I wish I might!
Please oohh God!
Let him be mine!
I'm in love!
And he is too!
I just wanna scream..
You mean the world to me!
All I want is some time
Just to say the 3 words to you
I
Love
You!
A contest entry
- Decided I want an AP Family by ShaShay.
850 points, ended February 14, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Love Me Tender~ by -Ink Artist-.
525 points, ended February 16, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awesome piece of poetry showing your love for someone special.. loved reading it.. thanx for sharing..
your AP Mom.. -
Sweet piece of your love for your special someone. You express the overwhelming feelings you get enveloped in when you fall head over heels. Nicely done. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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DQ'D
Sorry but I asked for new poems and this shows as a prewrite. Nothing personal...maybe you can write an original next time. -
Good Job
The only problem I see is that you are talking about HIM while I am a HER. LOL Good write however. I'll comment more at the end of the contest. Pen on... -
This seems such a sincere expression of being in love. It catches the spontaneous overtures , the giddiness, the hopefulness of someone who's 'true love' has finally crossed their path. It speaks of the age old wish that the other person will share those feelings. I like the freshness of this write. You did a very good job with the verbal expressions and the finale' is as priceless as the words themselves.
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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