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I tried

I tried real hard to do this
I tried hard to make it last,
But you cant move onto your future
If you cant let go of your past.
I kept on believing it’d get better
I tried to believe that someone cared,
But days grow real cold and lonely
When your with someone and still noone is there.

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  • loveaswellashate
    March 21, 2007

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    I liked this.. tho it is short.. its still really good.. thanx for joining and good luck in my contest..
    Laters
    Loves..*hugs*


  • Fox-Reaper
    February 26, 2007

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    Well i'm here now i'll keep you warm and i care
    Oh you will get better you are strong i can tell