Love, love stop running away,
Turn around and give a smile;
Wow, wow blow my heart away
Let me love you for a while.
Wind, wind catch my love,
I want her to make me fine;
Stop, stop my fair love,
You are always mine.
Love, love see the colors fall,
When the morn sings for our love;
Hey, hey hear my call,
See this spring is for our love.
Stop, stop my fair love,
I'll be where ever you go;
For you are my only love,
And I wish you know me so.
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
this is so melodious, stop , stop, Love Love, hey, hey..this is Lovely , Lovely.thanks for sharing your melodious imagination.
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Lovely! This is such a grogeous, lyrical poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Really lovely.
~Princess~
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I am a sucker for Love lyrics/songs written from the heart. This is just that . Great write.Take care and thanks for entering.
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Thanks
I can almost hear a melody to this without trying. It has potential. Do you have a melody for it? Thanks for entering my contest.
Andy
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Lovely
the repetation is an interesting effect and quite beautiful in its own way. Filled with emotion and it has a lovely flow. Good Job.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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this is really good i like the way tour able to express love and a reptitive way
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I like this
This is really good. As I read it, it just moved me. Great job.
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WOW
This is exactly what I needed to say to the one I love so much, so I have sent her a copy.
Hopefully now she will finally get it
Brilliant Rhyme and flow. I love the structure and the message
Keep going
me
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