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Conforming to Facetiousness

Breaking

I'm hidden behind glassy eyes

Shattered

Eyes that are mine no longer

Distasteful

Orbs of lacquered impurity that stain the concrete now

Foolish

To ever think that I could lay such impure orbs

Beauty

Upon one such as you

I don't want critical comments. I don't care if my grammar is off, or my spelling. I don't even care wether or not you like it. Just read it.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 25, 2008

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    This was nice. I like the tone of the write and what it's about and how you use words to describe the sentence that follows. Nicely done.