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lost him today

lost him today
in the valleys and peaks
inside the highs and the lows
i lost him today

"god wants them for his angels,
to sit at his side,"
or so they say
"they're in a better world now,
God has a plan for us all,"
or so i am told
apparently it's all okay
and apparently i'll get over it

but what they don't know,
what they can't see
only the good die young

and oh dear god
he was just kid

and oh dear god
he was so good

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rip 1.30.2007

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  • Diseased Mind
    February 27, 2007

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    oh my god, this is so emotional. I finished reading this and I just got chills down my back, it's such a strong writing. I think one of the things that makes this piece so good is the rawness of it. There are no pretentions, it's just touching. I'm sorry for your loss, I hope you eventually feel better.