My name is Maddie,
And I think I'm great,
I know everything in the world,
And you know nothing,
I am a preppy slUt,
With no respect,
I will call you names,
And make you cry,
I have blonde hair,
It really shows through,
You may not like me,
But we are not through,
You are less than me,
I am better than you,
I will make sure you know,
That you can not be like me,
My name is Maddie,
I need to be shot,
I get on so many people's nerves,
All I get is made fun of, and cry myself to sleep.
Author notes
This is about a girl in my school named Maddie. Sorry if it sucks, I am so tired but I liked this contest. I chose # 5. "Drinker of Fine Water."
A contest entry
- MUM's contest for EVERLASTING GLORY! by MessedupMarionette.
750 points, ended February 1, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh, Sweetie, this is really quite intense. Maddie sounds to me like she just needs a hug or someone to talk to. You did really well on this, and if you need me, I'm right here. Love, Mom
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Thanks for the comment mom, I havent talked 2 u in forever <3 u
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Thanks for entering, but I must be honest---Not the greatest poem in the world. It kind of reminded me of those kids on the playground that hold their hair in pigtails and go "Nanana! I'm Jessica!!" and blow raspberries. You have a fair amount of emotion, but there's nothing you seem to be doing with it...
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I understand that but I tried something new, and it turned out bad. But i am glad you were honest.thanks
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you know, this is quite a powerful write, seems to come from the pen of someone who has suffered from this girls anger and hurt. maybe, if this has been born from fact, that this girl needs a wake up call, someone to talk to, rather than just shout and curse all day. She sounds as if, deep inside, she is suffering, and needs rescueing. her attitude is a front, and in time will crumble before her. try talking one to one, if she listens you may find a wanting friend, if she doesnt listen, her loss. but in time, she will remember, and regret the chance you gave her, she will come to you first.
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I would kill her....we dont get along @ all i dont like her
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you would do yourself a huge favour, if you would just learn to get on and learn to like her. trust me, I'm sure Mom, Pattyann would say the same. you know you can talk to her about anything, she wont let you down.
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That is not happening. I dont like her and she dont like me. So we cant do that, we used to be on the dance team at our school and we didnt get along then and that was our freshman year and now we are seniors. I know that I can talk 2 her about anything, but I dont like that girl and so I wont get to know her.
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