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Beautiful - Affliction


Cutting
    Slutting
Free Base
  Hoeing

Lost minded
Empty Sited

Alone
Breaking into two wholes.


I cried alone inside and out
    Feeling no pain
    Feeling not proud

A quiet place for me to run
A quiet place for me to be done.



I cooked
I cleaned
I washed
I steamed
I tried
I cried
I toked
I smoked


I'm tired of you
I'm finnished!
  I'm not going to be washed up anymore
Or being your slave rid whore



I'm not a streetwalker
Or a night stalker


.I'm a normal teenage broken down
Flawed beauty queen gone wrong.





I sat alone for many of years
  Just to know that you never cared
I Hate your guts!
  And wish you to hell!


Break all your bones
And throw you down the wishing well.



I'm cut
I'm bruised
I'm broken
I'm used

I got thrown away like a unwanted tissue


  I use to be
A speedy
A loner
A stoner


I use to be
Your rag doll
Your made-up drama queen
A broken down SUV


I'm tired of your shit
And want to quit!
Alone I will break
So leave me for all's sake!




  Let me dance in the rain
Like I use too

Let me anoy strangers
And kick pranksters
I wanna be...
And only be..

ME





Cause baby
I am my own Beautiful Affliction










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  • Princess-of-Chance
    May 26, 2008
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    Wow terrific poem!!! its very I don't know how to describe it! It's beautiful!!!

  • RottenXHeartX
    February 1, 2007
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    Haunting. X


  • Eternal Eclipse
    February 1, 2007
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    thanks


  • Skyscar
    February 1, 2007

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    wow....i'm stunned!!!!

    *bows* This is the most greatest poem ive..EVER read! I loved it! So much emotion and touch, so much care and angst! fantastic!


  • February 1, 2007

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    beautiful picture very cute!

    I lved this poem of yours, it is very expressive and filled with all sorts of emotion. A 110 fo you!

    FH


  • February 1, 2007

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    beautiful picture and way of writting. A for a very talented poet!!


    mishaa

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