I have found someone
who will always be my best friend
in all ways.
I can tell her everything,
she will be there for me forever.
The instant we met we clicked
and she and I will be connected
Always, in all ways.
I have found someone
who will always be my love
in all ways.
He has been my strength
in my times of need
and he has listened to me
when no one else has.
I will love him forever and
Always, in all ways.
I have found someone
who will always be my mentor
in all ways.
He has taught me how to lead
and how to work well.
I will think of him as I work,
and take pride in my job
Always, in all ways.
I have found so many people
throughout my life
who have changed me for always
or in all ways.
I will remember these people
and how they have affect my life
Always, in all ways.
A contest entry
- Only The Good Die Young by Brugge is dood.
450 points, ended February 2, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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Always, in all ways, so strong so true, i love your word usage, it is so powerful, and so interesting. I really enjoyed reading your poem. It's message was great and it has effected me for'always, in all ways' i am very grateful for you for having wrote such a touching poem. Great write and good luck in the contest!!
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nicely written, and I like what you've done with putting the title in to the poem so many times,
well done =D
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