Sweet Goddess of the Full Moon
My heart is weary
I am broken and empty
Yearning for my love
My heart I gave to him,
willingly he accepted
Now he is lost in his desire,
and hides our secret in his silence
I cry for the absence of my beloved
Alone, I sit and sigh my soul away
Sweet Goddess of the Full Moon
Your light is a fire within us
Let him feel my love, as I feel his
Ease his confusion
Wash away his fears
with my tears of longing
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This piece comes through like a paen. I love the feel here! A very spiritual piece.
Love you
J
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washed away in sadness.....
I am without words. You have so eloquently penned this piece. I love the raw emotions and the elegant use of metaphor. You transport the reader to a place where tears flow as freely as the ink in your pen.
Don
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Thanks for entering, but you did not beat the moon cliche with this.
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NICE
I think this one is so sad, but yet so true. Love is crazy, but we all crave for it. You have done an explicit job here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
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Beautifully sad
The thoughts/words of a woman who loves, is lovely and yet feels unloved
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So Tender!
This poem was awesome! It brings tears
of joy to my eyes. When I think of a woman,
these images you summon in this extraordinary
write come to mind. No one could write like this
except they had the gift within. You're blessed
and I believe you know it.
What a truly beautiful experience
it was reading this lovely and compassionate write. -
Beautiful piece, expertly written. I love reading a nice love poem. Not a musshy one. I don't write love poems well so I tend to stay away from writting them. This is a unique and heartfelt piece. It almost sounds like it started out to be a prayer.
I don't have a favorite part because I loved it all. great work.
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Very Good
This is realy good
The center and last stanzas are gifted
Like it all
Like this
Let him feel my love, as I feel his
Ease his confusion
Wash away his fears
with my tears of longing
Beautiful
Rick
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ah sweet sticky love, sometimes we can but hope, to pry ourselves from the essence of it all
spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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that is true love....i think. for you. you keep bending and waiting and bending some more. asking that his confusion be taken away, not yours. or something like that. good job with writing this. hope it works out. enjoyed.
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great call out in desperation....and hurt breeds acts of desperation and longing....excellent write ....especailly how you are more concerned for him...awesome....
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Oh, my goodness....what a beautiful presentation of your poem. It makes me hurt for you... and him. The goddess can take her time, dear heart...but what is worthy and right, willcome about. You deserve only the most awesome.... I am sure the Universe hears you.
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Oh this one just makes me want to beat him upside the head and say what are you thinking of man!!! She looves and adores you!!! Washes me away with sad love songs.
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