Frustration fills the air,
although you have no clue,
I do.
Trust is a wonderful thing,
and promises aren't meant
to be broken.
You know I love you,
but it's like a slap in the face.
I don't want to control you.
I just want to save you,
from the darkness that
overpowers life's very existance.
Nothing more nothing less.
I open up to you.
You "talk" to me.
Around every corner,
I wish I would have
closed my eyes - been blind.
I don't want to see this
come between us.
But it's tearing me apart.
I can't talk to you,
not about this,
not again...
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This poem even has a sweet mystic sense to it. Well thought out..nicely done. A great expression of a deep image of natural truth. And the last few lines gave me a sonnet kinda vibe. All in all, very enjoyable. Well done and thank you for sharing. This is a great poem. I love it all... the poem, the background, the topic....it's all great. keep writing......you have a lot to offer.
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