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He Is A Fine Machine

In tangles of basslines there
sits a mechanical boy.
    He's an expirement, left
  over from someone else's
operation table.
His heart belongs to pixels
and satelites;
    his hands for himself,
    as a miser hoards gold.
He does not bend. nor
l  e    a      n  with time.
Wire tendons,
iron sinew, sleek as
vapor trails.
Capable of spitting volumes
of knowledge at 250mph he is
a fine machine.

One must wonder if there was
ever room enough for daisies.

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  • Dean
    January 31, 2007
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    Nice point. Everything built up to two poetically-anti-climatic lines. Nice.