Old friends make great new lovers
its hard some times for you to discover
what you have been missing
mountains and time separate you
but some how you pull though
and find them
and make them howl
toward the moon
now closer than ever
your distance
a negative number
deep inside of her
as she softly whispers your name
not and ounce of shame
runs though your veins
as all the things around you
begin to change
your hot passion
nothing more than lust
but you love her all the same
and she understands your pain
that you are not meant for each other
but loves to be your old friend my new lover
be harsh please
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This almost made me cry. Ugh... lol. I went throught that, and still am. Love sucks. But I really like it. I don't know what else to say. Great write!? jk, lol.
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Interesting way of looking at old friends (note spelling of this word in title). Makes sthe relationship so different when one old friend becomes your new lover - sometimes this just doesn't work out, and then the friendship is also lost.
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as she softly whispers your name
not an ounce of shame
runs though your veins
That was beautifulll
<3333 Kayla
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Aww make me feel loved why dont ya. thanks very much you should look at my new poem, instpried by your form of writing. thanks agian.
~@Josh R.@~
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