They were stars on sunset blvd.
Rulers of grunge
Ashy hair
Spoiled breathe
Dirty finger nails
Locking tight
King and queen of the outcasts
Their twisted love
Gothic romance
was only beautiful to the land
of the streets
With nothing but love
and a pack of smokes
They were stars
In the street scene
He was the boy that good girls
guilty pleasured over
and she was the girl
that good boys wanted to clean up
and take home to mom
always together
never apart
meddling in the filth and dirt
making love under bridges
and in alleyways
They had nothing
yet everything
in the confusion
of love drugs and rock n roll
Thats what set them apart
from the normal
and in the end
is what led to their demise
In the land where dreams
never become anything
And nothing is as glamorous
as what it appears to be
A contest entry
- make me hurt with you by drunknmindsobrheart.
300 points, ended February 16, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your prewrites!!!!! by Nereida Nightshade.
450 points, ended February 19, 2007, 101 entries
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Lovely its so different and the words just really grab the reader. Well done and thanks for entering.
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wow this was very interesting and a very good write. well done
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you are wonderful
truly amazing, honey.
you always know how to awe me with your writing.
i love you so much!
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I liked this a lot, very different and unique. A lot of emotion is in this and I could picture it all. I hope to read more from you.
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i really really liked this like a wayyyyyyyy lot
excellent write -
Very interesting! I enjoyed...this was indeed something new and different to me. Thanks for sharing.
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Different...something that once was...love...gone..thanks for sharing
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wow I love it, it's so gruesome, and I have to say the title's actually really enticing
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